This is the first page where I've felt it necessary to tweak the dialogue for the online version. Llewellyn's last line is different in the original script and, indeed, will be different when we knock out the print edition of issue #1.

That's something else I want to talk to you about.

As we near the end of Issue #1 online, we're now starting to prepare the print edition. I'd like to gauge what the demand for the print edition is going to be, so if you're interested in buying the first issue, which will include never before seen conceptual art by JjAR, let me know.